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The Raw Versus The Refined

It gets to the market

Of the community

But none priced it


For it was presented raw

To the people, in its raw nature

It is not beautiful to behold


All who sees it passed by it

Some hissed and shake their heads

Whole beholding it

It becomes the talk of the town

Yet its appearance pushed people

Off it, it couldn't be readily accepted


The owner was called aside

By a friend who discussed at 

Length with him


And one of the resolutions

Is ensure that this material

Passes through some forms 

Of refining


So that it becomes beautiful

And would be attractive to nay

Fewer people on the society

If the appearance is well worked 

Upon and it looks more comely

To all passers by


Whether in the market

Or at the most hidden part

Of the community


Not only those who have eyes

Will buy it, even those without

Sights will buy it


Because those with eyes 

Will proclaim its beauty to

Those without sights which

Will make them look for it

To be purchased


After reasoning together

The owner went an extra length

To get the material

Refined and redefined


The refining and the redefining

Gulped extra money and took

A while to complete


Some parts of the originality

Were lost during the process

Leaving about 35% of the 

Originality in place

While the remaining 65% were

Fake and substances were added

To make it attractive to people


But as the counselor has advised

People love it in this new nature

Than when it was 100% pure


Soon enough it becomes the

Talk of the town and it will

Soon be spread to other 

Parts of the globe


They purchased it all

Even at exorbitant price

Though low in quality and

Those without sights

Weren't left out


This new material did not last

Long but the raw One, which

Contains 100% of the original

Substance, not beautiful and 

Cheaper prices last longer.


People were after the trend not 

After the originality nor the truth.


(The End)

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